diff --git a/ch2.tex b/ch2.tex
index 7a6abdd..8ca3804 100644
--- a/ch2.tex
+++ b/ch2.tex
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Asd qsd 1sd & DIFFERENT & 234234234 & (no data) \\
 \draw[ultra thick](c) to (d);
 
 \end{tikzpicture}
-\caption{An example diagram typeset with TikZ. It is a good idea to write diagram captions to guide the reader on how to read the diagram. }
+\caption{An example diagram typeset with TikZ. It is a good idea to write diagram captions in a way that guides the reader through the diagram. Explicitly name the object where the diagram viewing should ``start''. Preferably, briefly summarize the connection to the parts of the text and other diagrams or figures. (In this case, would the tenative yellow Sun be described closer in some section of the thesis? Or, would there be a figure to detail the dotted pattern of the line?)}
 \label{fig:schema}
 \end{figure}